When I looked at the next proof, I discovered that in Chapter Three, when I eliminated an unnecessary phrase, I took out one word too many and now it didn't make sense. And on and on. But it is up, includes the map. and looks pretty good.
The camping trip to Thomson ended on a much pleasanter note than it started on. Wednesday was a little cooler, although still muggy, We took a little bike ride in to town for some lunchtime ice cream and even got rained on. It was so exciting! Wednesday night it had cooled enough to have a fire and we enjoyed a beautiful sunset. By Thursday morning, the front was through and it was fantastic.